Mark
Twain on Adjectives
Here's what Mark Twain has to say
about adjectives:
"When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I
don't mean utterly, but kill most of them—then the rest will be
valuable. They weaken when they are close together. They give
strength when they are wide apart. An adjective habit, or a wordy,
diffuse, flowery habit, once fastened upon a person, is as hard to
get rid of as any other vice."—Mark Twain
As an exercise, write or rewrite a short scene
in your writing without using any adjectives or adverbs. Use
carefully chosen verbs and nouns to convey as much information as
you can. After you have done so, add back in any modifiers you
believe are essential to the writing.
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